Lovely drop in Proverbial Ocean - Part II
Hi folks, I like to introduce the co-author for these stories. EmptyMind. She is my best friend. If you like these stories, now you know whom to appreciate! ;) If you haven't read the chapter -1, click here
Chapter 2 : On Sunday
Vasanth was unable to believe his luck. Inspite of German loosing the match, his proposal has been accepted. Now his mind was racing.. "When am I going to meet her next? How happy can our lives be? How did she manage to keep a blank face after seeing the SMS?"etc etc. All he could think of at that moment was the song "Ragasiyamanadhu kadal".
Now to Janu. She in her thoughts: "Why the hell did he tell me after all these years? I don't have time now. I gotto rush. Does he really know me after 10yrs? Yeah. Agreed I love him but am not sure if I am worth such a nice guy. Will my parents agree? Will his parents agree? Was I fast enough in telling a yes but you know its OK. I love him so agreed. Nothing wrong in telling the truth. Atleast I made him happy for few minutes." etc etc. All she could think of at that moment was the lines from song Etho ondru " Antha theivam unnai kakka thinam thozhuven thavaramal".
Janu was denying for her wedding at home for the past few years hoping Vasanth to propose her. Finally she gave up on this and blamed her luck and agreed to her parents to start looking for a guy. The proposals started coming and now this came suddenly. GOD sometimes, these guys are really really slow in doing things.
Time to know about the family of both these.
As I told before, Vasanth believes he is born to lead a majestic life. He has never been denied of whatever he wanted in his life. He could get everything easily and has never seen the "other side" of life. Everything will happen normally. According to him, his parents will not deny this either. Basically, nothing much to tell He is a person born without a spoon ofcourse and was gifted with a silver spoon.
This Janu, has never seen anything that is "Normal" in her life. As mentioned before, for her life is a dream. She had to fight really hard to get even her smallest of all wishes to be fulfilled. The only faith in her life is GOD. Inspite, of all these things she has made every other person feel she is the luckiest soul on this earth and many were even jealous of her. At times, she used to laugh to herself thinking of these. People speak of multiple personality and it's really true in her scenario. One for her first circle of friends, One for everyone else and One for her family.
Thank God. It became Sunday evening. They had to catch the train and thanks to the people whoever had cancelled their tickets. The tickets were confirmed and they got 2 comfortable berths. The train was also empty when they boarded from their village. It gets filled after 3-4 hrs of journey in the next station only. So enough time for them to talk too The train started and they both in full smiles.
As always, Janu started speaking with her great questions:
J: So what SMS did you send me?
V: You read and replied right?
J: Yeah but tell me na?
V: OK..I love you. Now what?
J: When did you start thinking of this? Started getting this feeling?
V: Long time back.. thought of telling you and told now.
Like this on and on the conversation continued between these two for looooooooooooong hours till the people came. Nothing serious was discussed or spoken and both were in their own dreams. Expecting everything to move smoothly. Thinking of how to start telling people at home and how to convince each. Discussing seemed really easy to them. Looks like, they have never seen a love marriage in their life.
Falling in Love with a person is difficult. After that, getting the courage and telling it to that person.. life is gone! And finally it getting acknowledged and accepted nothing more to beat it. It has happened in both their lives What more is needed atleast to have some fun between them???
- To be continued
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21 comments:
the subjective development of love is said best, but we might never know how the personal or subconcious inside of us feel when in love. That is indeed mysterious...and you wrote a good story!....waiting for the next.
@Gp. thanks a million bro! your stories and poems are my inspiration.
Hello
Nice blog. Nicer to see that there is a part III.
Best wishes always
GB
@Empty mind. Yeah . thanks. you are my co-author in this story. If you say like the story, the credit goes to you also ;)
@GB.... thanks for appreciation. yeah I have lot to tell in future chapters.
btw do i know you? do you blog?
Hello guys (not u Satheesh),
What do u think of EmptyMind? I'm little confused & a bit speculating of something non-empty here. Do u say that there is an empty mind who is Nurturing a Dream? Ya Ya! I can hear it!
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@Rnajith,
dont fuel the speculations bro! Enjoy the story. :)
@EM and @Ranhjith
Sabbassh...sariyana potti!
I encourage this comptetiton to speculate stories on my life! :)
Satheesh,
From now on *Speculations* will be termed as *Gossips*. When these *G*s become real, never forget me to invite for a free lunch!!
EM,
Even in that noise, I could clearly hear this subtle Truth. I have snake's ears you know? Traffic in Blore, apart from being noisy can be dusty as well. Much better here. Then. Eventhough I didn't direct my question to u, Thanks for your explanation & confirming my uncertainties. (Satheesh, u have a very nice person to care abt u)
Anyways, I gonna get a free Lunch. >:O)
{The author of this comment is Ranjhith & not Rnajith or Ranhjith or Ranjith!! <:o()
@Ranjhith... me too sorry for spelling ur name wrong. I know u add one extra 'h', but didnt put that 'h' in proper place. :)
Yeah, You would have got treat from me. but now after you started all gossips, I have to think whether to take you for a treat or not ? ;)
when r u coming to bangalore next time?
it s nice
@anonymous...
Thanks for appreciation! But that appreciation is for that story or for Gossips in comments section??
EM & Satu, thanks for spelling that *silent* h in my name. As it is silent, generally people miss it - can't blame.
Then, Good that you have agreed for a free lunch. (Thanks for acknowledging that recommendation from EM).
BTW, the story a great going. Wud be great, if u cud link with the older parts of it.
@Ranjhith
will definitely link the older part of it! thats a good feedback.
hey ..
gud one .. waiting for the next part .. do keep me posted reg when the next part is goin live :)
cheerz
anu
@anu.
thanks yaar. will definitely ping you once part3 is up!
me and my co-author were discussing abt how shd it go? lets see....
howz life there?
hello da machi..
co-author vaichu kalajurae??
Good going da..it was really interesting. very much cherished...no doubt vasanth and janu are made for each other...
eagerly waiting for partIII...
part II ended without climax and suspense....add some more spice with suspense
@HOD...
thanks da macha for your lovely remarks!
periyavvanga sonnu perumal sonna mathirey! if u say they r made for each other, it shd be true.
part3 soon. me and my co-author busy in office.
Nice Story. Shows the inexperience though :-) An excellent grade can be provided for the starter.
RC
so sweet! and typical too..the girl wanting to hear more and the boy is like i said it already.
@mystic rose
Welcome here! I am surprised to see comments for this story after sooooo many days! anyways ;)
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